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henter 发表于 2007-6-8 11:50 PM

A New Member```

I'm Henter,a new member here
At first,excuse my poor english please.
Rember the first time I'm got to here,just want to find somebody to help me translate an article.
I hope I can improve my poor English here``````

hunterhe 发表于 2007-6-12 02:06 PM

Will you mind if I point out your mistakes in the sentences above?

1. first time I'm got to here" is wrong, I think you can say"first time  I came here";
2. If you  change "want to find" into "wanted to find" would be better, I think.:)

zlkxy118 发表于 2007-8-14 05:28 PM

回复 #2 hunterhe 的帖子

:victory:

joyancyy 发表于 2007-8-31 10:41 AM

:victory:
:loveliness:

kitten 发表于 2007-9-1 06:23 PM

:handshake :victory:

joyancyy 发表于 2007-9-5 08:13 AM

You will certainly be able to learn English

Yuki 发表于 2008-4-14 11:31 AM

:lol

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