Be yourself                              
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Whatever the superstar likes, you also like too. This is a popular trend in modern times. However, I did not understand it at all. I don’t know why those people do like that?
There are several of different things in the world. What on earth is the reason why those young people like the secular things or such elegant things?
People always sighs, “in modern times, young people has not firm beliefs.” Actually, I don’t agree completely. Because each coin has two sides. The young generation has countless advantages, if they have some disadvantages, it does not mean they have no beliefs. However, we must check ourselves, in fact, we express like that.
When a concert which presided by a famous star are held, these fans are thrilling.” “Oh, I love you, I will support you.” then they will spend lots of money on a round-ticket and admission ticket, no matter whether it is valuable or not. If they have no money, maybe they are also happy to lend, and then perhaps it changed their good lives. When the superstar dresses up strangely, the fans always imitate them. They also regarded them as fashionable things. That’s terrible .why do you want to do like that? Why not consider the real situation? I asked sincely in my mind.
I don’t object to this behavior. Relax doesn’t mean indulgent yourself. Maybe it is very useful to you. However, why not ask yourself “where am I? What is really wanted to do?” I am in dilemma.
Actually, there are lots of things that we could do .we get pleasance from being in the swim, but we also help those people need help. We can bring up our interesting to express our value and existence .we can devote to work and study completely. We also can help the disabled people to get happy and dignity .you are excellent as well as those superstars, even better. You only lack a chance. Why not admire yourself? Famous people are such that. When you have thought and ability to study and work, you will be a superstar not only in your mind, but also in other people’s mind.
As a motto said “everything you you are, nowhere you exist.”We are not famous persons, not superstars, but we can be ourselves .we can do what we really want to do and really need to do. I can depend on yourself to choose and appreciate, that’s not imitation at all.

I so appritiate your point,but I think you'd better check your writing,because I find that there are some mistakes in your composition.For example,verb and noun.

Hey buddy I am afraid I can't be with you on your pioint above. We Chinese are so often to emphasize the grammar rather than the soul of the essay. It is really a pity that we find ourselves doing totally correct in grammar but seldom have got fresh enough ideas to attract eyes of the different colors and meanwhile we can see that a lot of native speakers also have mistakes in their speeches or writtings but their ideas are so vivid and attractive to keep the whole thing beauty and green. With regard to the ideas of the first one called what male eagle right I also can't totally agree with your views Everyone has his or her own choice, it will be no big deal only if he or she regards it as his or her willings of couse this should never be against the low or acknowledged  morality so since their choice is based on their own willings probably only in this period and they haven't broken the law or go against the public moralily I think they are cool enough to be given of full repect.

I often ask myself this question:"Who am i ?" I don't know how to answer this question.....Because each coin has two sides...Of course each man has two sides as well. The one of me want to study hard and have a good habit, but that just want to do .I didn't do that before today.The other one of me is too bad to say,yeah....Perhaps in this word i am the first people who like this say himself,but i'm a bad girl in truth.

my  grammar is poor, so i always pay more attention on it

well,no mistakes,no progress.when you try to write a article,don't afraid to make a
mistake.Iam not good at write English.Because iam studying aboard.i can speak and
undererstand.,but never care about grammar and spelling . Now i found i need to impove my English. Face youself it's nothing wrong.You can do it.
                                         Iam just what iam

I agree with you.yet I awalys  feel my english so poor...

agree, practice makes perfect. Just keep trying~

???? i can`t believe  my english so bad!!!   oh!!   i  need more practice

I agree with you

To be yourself is not bad

everybody has hia own life, right?

agree with you!

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原帖由 rain 于 2006-11-9 12:18 AM 发表
I agree with you.yet I awalys  feel my english so poor...

   agree with you