Dear my friends,

This is my paragraph, and i wish to hear your suggestion on how to make it better.  

Thanks ahead

Your sincerely Merryer



A LETTER TO MY LOVER


Dear Baor；
How are you?
I love you deeply as before. Every time I give my heart into your hands, that hits my soul heavily, maybe you can not understand. Perhaps I am not the best one, I must be the last lover of you. Could you give me a chance?
There is all kinds of dream about love in men and women’ mind, who wish to live together for ever. Sometime I asked myself: Is there a distance between you and me? I try to short it, but I can not success to touch the end line. So I only stared on you, let my soul fly, then calm down quietly. At this time any things and any feeling has left me alone. What is the matter with me? My heat has been death.
Someday I was awaked up as we occasionally met and said hello each other, then the strength is come back, the missing is get rid of, the hope is lighten again, but I want to held it into my hands FORFOVER and HAPPINESS, not PERIOD and HOPENESS.

Yours sincerely   Liu Xin

你写的真好,好感动哦
我的 水平在你的下面 ,以后多多指教
Thank you very much

Your article sounds strange. I would prefer to write the last paragraph as below:
I was cheered up by the occasional meet and sweet greeting for each other. At that time, I was full of strength and power. It gives me beautiful wishes. I wish I could have the chance to keep it forever, forever...